American Dream Nightmare
The American Dream can be defined or summed up as an “ideal
that every US citizen should have equal opportunity to achieve success, and
prosperity through hard work, determination, and initiative.” In the novel, TheWorking Poor, by David Shipler, the characters come from different backgrounds,
and different lifestyles with the ambition to accomplish the American dream.
Although each character is different, one thing that unites them all is that
they are all part of the workforce of America. They are the forgotten American
who’s hard work did not provide them with the equal opportunity of the American
dream. The author’s theme of the American dream being dead can be effectively
seen through the characters Caroline Payne, and her financial situations, and Claudio
and his wife, and the price they pay to work in America.
Caroline's Pain
Wal-Mart Wants You
Wal-Mart,
the company that has employed Caroline Payne, also employs Jennifer Mclaughlin,
a young mother who according to the article, Up Against Wal-Mart, by Karen
Olsson, is makes on a yearly average of $16,800, and is “considered high-paid” has
dealt with similar struggles that Caroline has dealt with for much longer.
Mclaughlin emphasizes in her quote “the way they pay you, you cannot make it by
yourself without having a second job or someone to help you, unless you’ve been
there for 20 years or you’re a manager.” This further stresses what Shipler was
using his novel for, living in a nightmare in which even the work you have isn’t
enough to provide families with basic essentials.
Stuck In America
Claudio and his wife are also symbols
that Shipler used to effectively show his theme of the death of the American
dream. Although, they are not Americans themselves, Claudio and his wife are
just as much as part of the American workforce as any other American citizen. They,
symbolize the many migrants that come from the farthest frontiers in search of
abundant work and hopefully pay, also. What they come to learn is that there is
a price for everything in America, including work. In the quote, “the young
couple set out on their new journey to a new life in America by agreeing to pay
a coyote, a smuggler of humans, to sneak them across the border from Mexico”
(Shipler 99), the price people pay to get to America is not just financial, but
also legal, risking their freedom for the opportunity to come work in America. The
migrants that do make it do not have an easy journey ahead of them, many, like
Claudio and his wife, have to pay off debts by the contractors before they can
start to see the fruits of their labor, and to even be able to return home.
Conclusion
The American
Dream was once attainable for anyone who worked hard and persevered through
tough times to get themselves and their families ahead. For David Shipler, the
author of the novel The Working Poor, the American dream is dead. The character
Caroline Payne elaborates as to why this is true because, in her time served in
the workforce of America, she has not achieved a promotion or a substantial pay
raise, even though she’s been thought to be a hard worker. Claudio and his wife also serve a specific purpose
as to why the dream is dead, they chose to make a financial sacrifice to come
to America to work, and hopefully prosper, for their family, only to be left
trapped here until they can pay their debts to America.
Work Cited
Olsson, Karen. Up Against Wal-Mart. Mother Jones. 2003. Web
Shipler, David. The Working Poor. New York: Vintage Books.
2004. Print

Hello francisco , your paper was really good . All the information was clear and to the point. Something that might help is breaking down the paragraphs so its easier to read. Over all nice job!
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ReplyDeleteHello Francisco, when reading your paper it seemed like you used more summary then needed. But besides that it had nice flow and was easy to read.
ReplyDeleteHello Francisco, when reading your paper it seemed like you used more summary then needed. But besides that it had nice flow and was easy to read.
ReplyDeleteHey Fancisco, I really liked your paper but like Jacob said I think you summarized a little too much, also don't forget to link the websites and add your works cite. Over al I think you did a pretty good job.
ReplyDeleteThe pictures are good as they emphasize your point. You might want to cite your quotes. Overall it looks good, but you will want to analyze your quotes just a bit more so they connect back to your theme.
ReplyDeleteHey Francisco, your structure of your essay is great as well as your pictures. This essay however feels more like a summary. I would consider maybe cutting down on the summary and link your examples to your theme and explain why the American Dream is dead. You have a really well written essay Francisco all you need to do is just link back to your theme and you will be good!
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